Once upon a time a young girl wanted revenge. But first, she wanted to be beautiful.
Twelve-year-old Bettony has read enough stories that begin with ‘Once upon a time’ to know what happens to the ugly stepsisters at the end, and she’s determined to escape that fate by any means necessary—even by magic.
Unfortunately, when it comes to magic, there is no place for regret, refunds, or exchanges. Even if you accidentally turn your older sister into a toad.
If Bettony wants her Happily Ever After to end well, she’s going to have to find a way to turn her sister back into a person before their mother finds out she’s been dabbling with magic and grounds her for life.
Tracking down the family magic turns out to be surprisingly easy. Now, if only it came with directions . . .
THE TROUBLE WITH TOADS (45,000 words) is the first book in a new upper MG series The Secret Stepsister Society. The second book will be released Summer 2013.
Now it’s time for my book review. So let’s go!
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
The trouble with toads was a very fun book to read. Although it never really said who the narrator was, most of the time that point of view provided a nice aspect to the storytelling. To say that 12-year-old Bettony gets into trouble when she turns her older sister into a toad is putting it mildly. Things go from bad to worse in no time. But in Bettony’s view, having a helpful and beautiful stepsister is worse.
Of course a lot of magic is involved. Maybe the magic isn’t bad, but in Bettony’s hands the results are disastrous. And grandmother can’t help fix the magical mess. So two girls and one unhappy toad are on their own. Needless to say, misadventures follow. The cleanup makes more messes, and the fairy godmother doesn’t help.
Right up until the end, I thought the story was going to turn out fine. It didn’t. Oh, no, not another sequel! Other than some errors, not so many as to be distracting, and a few overlong narrator sections, everything worked right up until the non-ending. Leafty had my heart except for the incomplete arc. Four stars, and hurry up and write that next book!
Author Danyelle Leafty
Danyelle Leafty writes upper MG and YA fantasy, and is the author of THE FAIRY GODMOTHER DILEMMA series. Danyelle has always loved fairy tales, and prefers stories where someone gets eaten, or at the very least, transmogrified. Much of her inspiration has come from fairy tales, because as G.K. Chesterton so aptly states, “Fairy tales are more than true: not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.”
In her spare time, she collects dragons, talking frogs, and fairy godmothers. She also collects books, and one day hopes to make a house out of them. She enjoys learning languages, fiddling with her harp, and perfecting the fine art of mothering. (It’s a lot like trying to herd chickens during a lightning storm while a goat stampede is going on.)
One of her heroes is Albert Einstein, particularly for the following quote: “Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow. The most important thing is not to stop questioning.”
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